Posted on September 25, 2008 at 2:21 pm
Grammar quandary (your response welcome)
I welcome input on this. I have a photo caption (edited slightly to remove people’s names from this public post) that currently reads: John Doe participates in the latest health screening which includes measuring blood pressure and weight, and a comprehensive blood draw to measure blood sugar, cholesterol, triglycerides, and other parameters. A proofreader was […]